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You're glowing orange and melting off
Lakes of steel plug up the flaws
Everyday's the end of me
The mindless cells assembling
How's the weather down there Mason?
Tattered cloth with vibrant blues
The flames outnumber fifty stars
Propaganda shrouds the truth
God is death, excluding you
How's the weather down there Mason?
Summer dies I feel so blessed
I breathe hard on unoiled lungs
Springtime air is sunshine dust
Serated smiles with inner rust
How's the weather down there Mason?
How's the weather down there Mason!?
Lakes of steel plug up the flaws
Everyday's the end of me
The mindless cells assembling
How's the weather down there Mason?
Tattered cloth with vibrant blues
The flames outnumber fifty stars
Propaganda shrouds the truth
God is death, excluding you
How's the weather down there Mason?
Summer dies I feel so blessed
I breathe hard on unoiled lungs
Springtime air is sunshine dust
Serated smiles with inner rust
How's the weather down there Mason?
How's the weather down there Mason!?
this is my view on how a good friend of mine feels.
*Masonba2000
*Masonba2000
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I love the imagery in this poem. I'm not sure if I really agree with the whole "God is death" thing, but otherwise, I really like this. I think you could have made it even longer, though. There's something more that you're not saying.